Submission (#1,#2)

★★★★ Cam and Isabelle are fighting their lust for each other as fear of crossing the line is bounding.

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This page is going to have the reviews for the whole series since each book is only 50 pages or so. It's a short read, and so, I'm going to write a review for the whole submission series here!

First book: Sweet Submission (Submission #1):

This is a book with alternative POV, from Cam and Isabelle Ashcreft. One day Brent (Isabelle's boyfriend, and her step-brother) take her out to 'surprise' her, only to discover he has taken her to a BDSM club. Her relationship with Brent wasn't pleasant, and her trust in him fail as he hurt her even one more last time.

Cameron, who has worked for the Ashcreft company since his graduation from college, was there coincidently. But after seeing her like that, his attraction kept growing for the girl he should never 'corrupt'.

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I have started reading this book with seriously no expectations. Yes, in the end, it surprised me! I actually liked it a lot more than I expected, and I was sincerely shocked by that.

This book isn't like other erotica novella's where the story focuses more on the sex, it has a very nice plot. Although I really wanted to hit Isabelle at first for being idiotic and for some of the choices she has made, but she has grown on me. She has developed through this very short read, and I really appreciate that. I got to see how she changed slowly, and how she was fighting her demons.

"By the time I'm through with you, you won't be able to hear my voice without wanting to come," Cam vows, stroking harder. I whimper in his arms.

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Positive:

The writing was also pretty good, and I liked Cam! A lot! He cared about Isabelle, and wanted to protect her, but at the same time, he wanted her. I love how he was fighting his feelings throughout this book. I also like the fact that he has a positive affect on Isabelle, and helped her to become stronger. The connection between these two characters were deep for a very long time, and it was way more than lust.

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Negative:

The only thing I didn't like about this book is that it was super short!! & when I say short, I mean only 50 pages long! Like seriously? Also, the story was a bit rushed, and Isabelle was naive at the start of the book because she was giving Brent too much in the name of "Love" while he was an asshole! However, that change as Isabelle's character develop (I really appreciate the development!)

Hero: 4/5

Heroine: 3/5

Plot: 3.5/5

Level of hotness: 4/5

Level of Romance: 4/5

Total: 4/5

Recommendation: I recommend this novella to anyone who likes short reads that are sexy, romantic, and messed up characters with a 'sad past'.

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Book two: Wild Submission (Submission #2):

In this book, there wasn't much happening to the characters except them getting to know each other. Isabelle wants to submit to Cam, and Cam is too afraid of hurting her, or taking advantage of her. He's also afraid that she doesn't actually know what she got herself into. However, we get to see how both of them enjoy their 'deal' more than they though. Isabelle has never been happier, and Cam is crossing his limit and doing things he has never done.

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I gave this four stars also since I really liked it, and it was entertaining & hot. I also love how Cam is taking the relationship very slowly, and I can see how a good guy he is. On the other hand, Isabelle has become stronger, and I noticed this development in this book as she face some problems. However, she's still not strong enough to make the right choice yet. Going to wait to read the next installment to read what happen though.

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My reactions while reading this novella:

At first I was like:

CAM!!

Then they finally agreed..

Then they did this, and that..

Then Cam was like..

& the ending..

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In the end, I have to admit that I like the first book better than this one since the ending didn't shock me. I'm going to complete reading this series, and I will see the 'secret' Isabelle is hiding. I seriously wish I can hit Brent in the face until he's bleeding all over, but maybe I'm overreacting. Anyways, Four stars for the Wild Submission!!